Overall i feel that my business pitch was a good one but there are some points that i have to certainly improve upon. I feel that i started off my pitch in a good manner by asking the class a common questioN being "How many of you have been tired after working out", i asked this question as i knew this would gather the attention of my peers and as thought they did respond.

It is very importnnt for an entrepreneur to have certain skills to improve in his line of business, there are essential skills which are common amongst all but certain ones such as risk taker, persevering, friendly and calm are not found in all the entrepreneurs.

In my presentation i decided to start from the very basic which was my business idea and then to focus on my main points which would give the audience a better understanding of my product which would inturn help me finish my presentation in a better manner.

1. Good communication skills

2. Leadership skills

3. Goal Driven

4. Time management- chalk out time properly

5. Positivity and not think negatively

6. Good delegation Skills

7. Take responsibiltiy maturely

8.  Hard working

9. Flexible/adaptable to change

10. Well oriented with work

11. Make full use of opportunities

12. Persevering

13. Innovative

14. Be consistent

15. Good thinker

16. Focus on Quality than quantity 

My feedback was pretty much the same as my impression I had of myself when I gave it. The one thing that I felt I did poorly on was having the long awkward pause towards the end of my speech. Joe pointed that out in his analysis of my pitch.  The pause was a result of nerves, but it could also be attributed to the strict structure I had for my presentation.

No matter how impressed you are with anything you do, it can always be improved by those who are on the outside looking in. The greatest form of correction and criticism comes from the insight of others. I thought our peer review of our business idea pitches was a fantastic idea and was extremely helpful in preparing me for the final cut. It was easy for me to identify that I was indeed, quite nervous. However, when that feedback comes from someone else, it bring the encouragement to settle down.

Finishing the elevator pitch I took my seat thinking that I had preformed to the level at which I had prepared.  Replaying the speech in my head I noted that I stumbled at least once during the speech.  It was noted by a peer that I however seemed calm and conveyed no real signs of nervousness. 

I thought I got my idea over to my audience pretty well.  I probably should have used up the time allotted better, but I didn’t want to bore my audience with minor details.  I just wanted them to be able to picture what I wanted to do and try and get them excited about it.